The Article Isn't Here. Here's What Was Sent Instead.

This is an edit note, not a draft. What arrived is a set of proposed line rewrites and suggestions from a previous pass, laid on top of an article that wasn't included in the submission. There is nothing here to copy-edit because there is no article to copy-edit.

Don't trust the coffee when someone hands you a mug and calls it a meal.

The closest thing to source material is a single structural observation buried in the middle: the tension between Tourism Tasmania's public mandate and a campaign that tells people to stay away. That's a real story. It deserves a real draft.

Send the actual draft and this desk will do its job.